• NoneOfUrBusiness@fedia.io
    link
    fedilink
    arrow-up
    5
    ·
    15 days ago

    Okay as someone who used to have this exact problem in the past, you should learn to avoid run on sentences and comma splices. Using relative clauses to join sentences also makes things ten times harder to understand. As a rule of thumb if you have more than three commas in one sentence there you should probably put down a period somewhere and start a new sentence.