• TheRealLinga@sh.itjust.works
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    11 days ago

    Read this to my wife, telling her it’sa poem. She likes the wordplay, and the metaphors. It made her feel uncertain, uneasy.

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      11 days ago

      Wait let me try the same

      edit she said it’s beautiful, she could feel the wind. We’re not native speakers, so not sure she understood every line. But still